Can you hear me ? Bahn ? Bahnn

This artwork is really good in lots of aspects, altough there are some little things I should advice you about. But art is art, so my advices are just optional to be followed. This one is good in it's own way, and I will say why.

Olly's pose is superb. For someone that always argued about drawing women, you did a really great job here! Her hand is a bit too masculine, but it's just a matter of training. But she looks feminine, cute, and with a really good expression. You just should work a bit on the shadows she is casting on the blackboard. It doesn't seem much that she is touching the board. Try some "harder" shadows, and try to put some on the side of her fingers as well.

But the shadows in an overall are looking extremely good! You are improving a lot on that!

For Bahn, you drew him very well, and congratulations! You made a good expression on him! The only problem is that you maybe have made a too angry face to someone that is sleeping. You should try to change his eyebrows a bit, to make a more sleepy face. But you are improving on expressions, specially on her!

As some have said, you gave a "start of evening" look to the drawing. Of course, you have worked with too much yellow, what helped a lot to give that look. But I can't see the problem with that. The warm colors help to understand why Bahn would be sleeping, because the time the picture seems to be showing is a "sleepy" time.

Also, I loved the details on the blackboard. You must have spent a long time working on that. It really looks like a blackboard! And the writings on it are super well done as well!

I believe this piece is special, well done, and an awesome proof of improvement.